Reaction to Obama's Tuesday evening speech was swift
and brutal. "JUNK SHOT," blared Huffington Post's homepage. "What
was the point?
" asked Jason Linkins. "What
a terrible speech
," said Kevin Drum.

Having gone back and watched it a second time, I think these
reactions may be a touch overwrought. Whenever Obama speaks, there's
always some set of politically engaged people who emerge disappointed
that he was low-key and restrained when they wanted something grand and
cathartic. That's just the kind of politician he is.

Still, I can't argue too much: Obama has never seemed less in
command, less confident, less the master of his moment.

There is one bit of the speech the significance of which is being
overlooked. It comes in the part on clean energy policy, which many
commenters dismissed as palaver. "Cheap platitudes," sniffed Josh
. Clive
dismissed it as "lame, formulaic, [and] campaign-style."
"Little better than inaction," concluded Ben
. "Basically," said Jon
, "he's saying he just wants some kind of bill." Drum snarks,
"This gives pabulum a bad name. ... He didn't say a single word about
what he himself wanted."

But that's not quite right. Obama didn't mention a cap on carbon, but
he did mention a few specific things, and what he chose to mention has

Accept, for the sake of argument, that the prospect of a cap or price
on carbon is dead this year and there's nothing Obama can do to revive
it -- or at least that Obama and Rahm believe as much. (Or assume, as Marc
Ambinder claims
, that Obama's strategy is to lay low, wait, and add
a carbon price in conference.)

What, then, should he ask of a bill? What are the top energy, as
opposed to climate, priorities? As it happens, most of the energy
options on the table are mediocre-to-terrible (mainly Bingaman's bill
and Lugar's bill). That side of the bill badly needs strengthening in
three key areas if it's to be a substantial step forward:

So what three policies did Obama choose to call out individually?

Some have suggested raising efficiency standards in our buildings
like we did in our cars and trucks. Some believe we should set standards
to ensure that more of our electricity comes from wind and solar power.
Others wonder why the energy industry only spends a fraction of what
the high-tech industry does on research and development -- and want to
rapidly boost our investments in such research and development.

I could be reading too much into this -- "some believe" and "others
wonder" aren't exactly cris de coeur -- but these words were
chosen carefully. Normally Obama's energy pitch includes ritual nods to
"clean coal," nuclear power, and domestic drilling. None of those made
an appearance last night; it was only energy efficiency and renewable
energy. That strikes me as a deliberate (and welcome) message to the
Senate about what Obama wants on the energy side of a bill.

That's hardly enough to salvage the speech, of course. But it's not

David Roberts is a staff writer for Grist Magazine. To read his and other experts' live commentary on Obama's address, click here.

(Official White House photo by Pete Souza.)